These melodies are so pretty they in fact melted my brain.
The tone of the composition here to me is sorta reminiscent of Heal from the Ico soundtrack; it feels like an intense glimmer of hope and it is a significant touch to the heart the whole way through. It is pleasing to listen to and the soundscape it paints is permeated in a sort of invigorating happiness that I find hard to explain.
One nitpick I guess I have is that it could use some more dynamic variation to ease in & out of some sections, although it doesn't affect the experience that much as it is quite a short track. One could say that the main motif is a bit pervasively static throughout the entire thing but I personally don't mind it so much as the instrumentation surrounding it does provide enough variation to keep the track from feeling entirely stagnant at any moment.
If this were to be extended I could easily imagine a second half where the mood of the composition is turned on its head while the track disintegrates into a reverb wall towards the end. It is totally fine as it is now & and I feel that any minor alteration could easily destroy the delicate emotion it portrays so actually please forget I wrote this paragraph.
Also, is that Gross Beat on the breaks in the second half? I think I recognize those sequences, usually that would be somewhat of a turn off but here it doesn't sound lazily executed so it doesn't bother me as much as it would otherwise.
All in all, this is lovely and beautiful and definitely going into the dedicated NG folder in my local music library. <3